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One More Day

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Bremoril
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My husband wrote this little poem for me: I wish we could have everyday To sit beneath the trees To talk and laugh playfully And do as we please If I could cast a magic spell To put this cold world on hold I'd summon all my magic power And we would never grow old I wish we could shrink ourselves And live inside the fairy garden I'd sell off all my things And pay for such a bargain If I could spend one more day Before the day I would die I'd show you where I'll be waiting For you my love, in the sky...
Elrond
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Nice! I too want to cast a spell like that!
Friggin Lord Elrond!
Frej
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wow
Jaysen
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very cool.
W. R. Frady
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Smooth, lyrical; Nice poem. Thank you for sharing it.
I am a writer based in the foothills of North Carolina, specializing in Gothic Horror and Fantasy. Though I do play around with some Science Fiction.