A Collection Of Descriptive Paragraphs
StoriesToastedCrumbs
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Cian climbed out of the ditch, and as he brushed the soil from his clothing he was finally able to get a closer look at the hut ahead. It was built from river stones, moss and ivy seemed to grip it to the ground. Through the wall poked a solitary circle window, glazed with dust. Its roof was in shambles and made of sticks, and it was built around a red brick chimney poking up through the center of the circular home. The hut was surrounded by tall grass, and its soil was like a swamp, leaving a stagnating smell and providing host to a community of flies. Large river stones embedded in the ground led near from where Cian was standing to the foot of the hut. There, a large rock was a makeshift step to a door fashioned from ragged wood, and hastily covered with dilapidated green paint.
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