pounding war drum heart flaming sky, victorious I embrace the sun

Oh! A haiku! I haven't really seen any fantasy-ish ones before, but you've nailed it! heheh. I just love this! You paint such a lovely image with so little words. Everything in so in sync- how it is seemingly a battle, and you connect the war drums with the heartbeat, and so on. This is wonderful! I congratulate you on a beautiful poem! -Evala

I like it.

nice!