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Conundrum
PoetryMallenwen
Slave – Lvl 3
Something I wrote from the point of view of a character in a short story I wrote:
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I am a scholar
As everyone knows
I’ve studied Shakespearian
Writing and prose.
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I’ve done math equations
That may just astound you
And my words have built castles
That right now surround you.
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I have played Mozart
And I have played Bach
And had daring ideas
That made everyone talk.
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I’ve studied philosophy
With interest and zeal
And read works of Plato
At all of my meals.
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But I sit in my chamber
And don’t know what to do
Because I cannot find
Words to describe you.
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Updated 3 March 2013 (22:01)
Szczepan von Karma
Sergeant – Lvl 16
It's good . My only complaint would be you overuse starting the next line with 'and'. Other then that the rhymes are good and it has excellent flow when spoken, which to me is the most important part of poetry.
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To know is wise, but to understand is a far worthier goal.
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Citizen – Lvl 8
It is indeed
Most pleasant to read
Therefore,at your leisure
Bring us similar pleasure.
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The Initiate Being....Release.