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Conundrum

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Mallenwen
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Something I wrote from the point of view of a character in a short story I wrote: - - I am a scholar As everyone knows I’ve studied Shakespearian Writing and prose. - I’ve done math equations That may just astound you And my words have built castles That right now surround you. - I have played Mozart And I have played Bach And had daring ideas That made everyone talk. - I’ve studied philosophy With interest and zeal And read works of Plato At all of my meals. - But I sit in my chamber And don’t know what to do Because I cannot find Words to describe you.

Updated 3 March 2013 (22:01)

Elrond
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Nice!
Friggin Lord Elrond!
Szczepan von Karma
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It's good . My only complaint would be you overuse starting the next line with 'and'. Other then that the rhymes are good and it has excellent flow when spoken, which to me is the most important part of poetry.
To know is wise, but to understand is a far worthier goal.
Release
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It is indeed Most pleasant to read Therefore,at your leisure Bring us similar pleasure.
The Initiate Being....Release.
Johny2x4
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That's pretty deep
Ametair
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It's wonderful, the rhymes are perfect. I liked it very much.
I sense a soul in search of answers...